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This is a story that a lot of people can relate to. One of the better fanfictions that I have read. To me, it shouldn't matter weather the characters have been copyrighted or not. What matters to me is the grammar and rhetoric (writing skills) applied and the ability to relate/comprehend what the reader is reading or has read. The sarcasm and grouchiness applied here can be a relatable topic that almost everyone can relate to. I hope that NezumiHaruka will continue to write more like this and continue to push towards her strengths and try to work at her weaknesses. I hope that we can see more exemplary work (more big words) like this one in the near future. -Alexis
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NezumiHaruka Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Dear Jenelle20,

First of all, thank you very much for the critique. It's nice to actually get one every once in a while.

Secondly, I really appreciate all of the nice things you said about my work! It makes me very happy that someone is commenting not just about the characters, but from a plot and grammatical point of view.

I shall try my hardest to push towards my strengths and work on my weaknesses. Also, yes, you can expect more works like this one.

I shall take everything that you have said on board.

Thank you,

Steph.
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I hpoe to see more and expect too see more of my work and my crtiques! Read my journal for more on my latest story. I think you, along with many others will like this.
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NezumiHaruka Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem! I look foreword to many more~ :D
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I need more of your writing.
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NezumiHaruka Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconohstopityouplz:~ :heart: Happy to oblige!
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
F*** YES!
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